Updated: Apr 7
WHAT ARE SCHOOLS LOOKING FOR IN A PERSONAL STATEMENT?
A personal statement is an essay explaining to the college admissions committees who you are. This is quite possibly the most open-ended aspect of your college application. While, at this point, you likely have minimal say in what your transcript or test scores might look like, you still have complete control over your personal statement. You should avoid looking at this as intimidating, and instead see it as an exciting opportunity to show colleges what you’re made of and why they should want you in their campus. When reading your personal statement, colleges are, first and foremost, looking for a peek into who you are and what you care about. Specifically, schools are looking for leadership, tenacity, and demonstrated interest. Additionally, colleges and universities will look at your personal statement as a measure of your writing ability.
LEADERSHIP, TENACITY, & DEMONSTRATED INTEREST:
Leadership: Colleges want to see that you have emerged as a leader in your community and that holding a leadership role is important to you. Every school wants fearless leaders on their campus—show them that you can be one by weaving references to your leadership skills into your essay.
Tenacity: Tenacity is determination and persistence. Colleges want to see that you are equipped with a growth mindset and that you are prepared to look a challenge in the eye. Use your essay as an opportunity to showcase an obstacle that you have overcome and to explain what you learned from this experience. When the going gets tough, the tough gets going. Universities want to know that when life throws you a curveball, be it an impossible Statistics problem set or a personal dilemma, you will not shy away from the challenge.
Demonstrated interest: Showcasing your interest in a particular university will come more naturally in your supplemental essays for that school than it will in your general personal statement. Demonstrated interest will show schools how much you like their school and how likely you would be to enroll if admitted. In college-specific personal statements, show colleges that you have spent ample time researching and considering their school, and that you know for a fact that it is a perfect fit for you. To do this, you will have to put in time and effort. Find programs and majors that interest you in your top schools and make sure to include them in your personal statement. Explain how and why the school connects to your experiences up to this point and elaborate on experiences you hope to gain that make these schools appealing to you.
Schools will use your essay to get insight into your writing ability. No one expects you to be a best-selling author, but colleges want to hear your voice and see that you are capable of writing clearly and fluidly.
If writing doesn’t come naturally to you, it may help to read your story aloud and then play the video back and type out what you have spoken. This way, you can limit grammatical and awkward phrasing. However, not everyone is super confident with their writing. And if you are one of them, don't be afraid to get expert help. Even though reading our blogs would make significant improvements to your personal statements, experts may help you improve your essays to another level. Experts know how to phrase sentences differently to make them more appealing to the admission readers. Furthermore, experts know exactly which traits admission readers are looking for in students and why they are looking for those traits. Every advantage and piece of feedback can make a difference. The next best option would be to refer to this blog and apply these points as much as you can. If you do decide to get help, please make sure that the person you are working with has professional experience working with admissions officers, and has a good understanding of what they are looking for. Oftentimes, so-called "experts" may be just as clueless as to the students themselves.
WHAT SHOULD YOU WRITE ABOUT?
The most important tip here is to write about something you are passionate about. If you write about something you love that is important to you, the writing process will be fun and will go smoothly. On top of this, your reader will be able to hear your passion and excitement through your writing voice, making you an appealing college candidate. Your statement should tell a story about you in your writing voice-- it does not have to be, and in fact, should not be, as rigidly structured as your high school essays have been. Be yourself and have fun with it!
Summary of Personal Statement Tips:
· Show leadership, tenacity, and interest
· Read your statement aloud
· Have experts read/review your statement
· Write about something you are passionate about
· Have fun with it!
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